Should HR Be Telling Stories?

Storytelling in HR

I’m not referring to fiction or fabrication.

The question relates to the role of storytelling techniques in the HR function.

The question also happened to be the thrust of my talk at the Alexander Mann Solutions (AMS) conference last week in Hong Kong.

It turns out that one can make an argument for HR more than any other function needing storytelling. After all, the ability to recruit and retain talent often determines the success of a company.

Of course, HR wants to be persuasive in its communications.


In a world in which companies compete for talent with the ferocity of nine-year olds after smashing open the piñata, one would  expect HR to lead the charge in applying storytelling techniques to their communications.

Not so fast.

It’s human nature to resist change, and from my unscientific observations, the language of HR still takes its cues from the mahogany row handbook drafted during the Reagan administration. Sure, there are exceptions to the rule, but most of today’s HR communications depend on the same uninspired language.

My talk at the AMS conference zeroed in on the job journey captured in the following illustrations:

Job_Journey infographic- storytelling in HR

Every interaction is an opportunity for HR to influence the candidate’s perception of the company and the actual job.

Take something as seemingly simple as the auto-generated email that confirms receipt of a candidate’s resume or application. Here’s an example of how 99 percent of these emails read:

Generic_email- job application confirmation letter- storytelling in HR

Forget differentiation.

Just adding a shard of human warmth would improve the note. Ironically, the above words came from a creative services company.

John Ciancutti, who has hired hundreds of engineers in building world-class teams at Netflix, Facebook and now Coursera reiterated:

“Every touchpoint in every phase of your process should drive toward that result.”

With this in mind, here’s the note we recently implemented for candidates to confirm receipt of their application:

Hoffman Agency job application confirmation letter- storytelling in HR

We don’t expect our auto-confirmation email to prompt the candidate to channel Jim Carrey with a “So they’re telling me there’s a chance. Yeh!!!”

We do believe that allowing our voice to come through the note helps the candidate get to know us a little better.

And the better that candidates know us, the more likely they’ll sign on the dotted line.

Side note: Alexander Mann hired a graphic recorder to capture each of the talks at the conference. Here’s the “picture” from the talk.

Lou Hoffman- Should HR be storytelling

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Visual Storytelling, Online Radio and SEO Media Covers Storytelling

The grab bag post is back.

Here goes.

Visual Storytelling from VentureBeat

VentureBeat publishes stories every day on the latest startups to secure venture funding.

As you might imagine, the visuals that usually accompany these stories might  be called uninspiring (to be kind).

So I enjoyed the double entendre when VentureBeat channeled Breaking Bad in the photo that accompanied the SpareFoot story on fund-raising to expand its storage unit business.

Breaking Bad - visual storytelling venturebeat

Walter brings a certain “je ne sais quoi” to any story. I’ve had a good bit of success working him into our storytelling workshops.

(h/t to Craig Matsumoto who flagged this on Twitter.)

Online Radio on the Rise

When was the last time you pitched online radio?

That’s what I thought.

Check out these numbers:

Online Radio Chart reach consumption

Such an up and to the right growth curve should get our attention. Specifically, 44 percent of Americans age 12 and up listen to online radio on a weekly basis.

As you drill into the numbers beyond the music category, you find that niche programming  — a byproduct of low barriers to entry — is thriving.

It reminds me of the blogging market as a sphere of influence. It’s a quality, not a quantity game, identifying those online radio targets with relevance and influence (or what I call “rinfluence”).

SEO and Storytelling — a Dynamic Duo

I’ve been on the soapbox for some time for PR to expand its game into earned search (organic search).

With Google squeezing the technical gamesmanship out of earned search, it’s all about the content in determining what shows up on the SERP (search engine results page). Variables such as third parties linking to the content, how long visitors stay on the content, etc., constitute signals of worthiness.

I’m noticing that the media properties focused on the SEO community are getting that old time storytelling religion. For example,  Search Engine Journal recently published “Brand Storytelling 101: The Essential Elements.”

Over 1,000 words and not a single mention of how to optimize a Web page for search. Bravo!

On the not-so-good side, this passage caught my attention.

“Not only well-known operations can have motivating stories. The dry cleaners down the street may well have been founded by someone who noticed that people smile more when they feel good and confident in their appearance — and clean, pressed clothes can affect that. This business’ story? They empower people.”

I’d call that a stretch.

The root beer yogurt at Willow Glen Creamery has been known to cause smiles, but “empowerment” doesn’t make its value proposition.

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Hey, Everyone Enjoys a Pat on the Back

BulldogAwardDesignation - Ishmael's Corner winner Best Blog for PR Agency/Consultanc

There are times when it’s just not possible to say what you want to say in a headline and also optimize that headline for SEO.

This is one of those times.

The Bulldog Digital Awards recently named my blog as “Best Blog for PR Agency/Consultancy” with the gold designation.

I’m thankful that the judges didn’t hold the outdated design against me. As I mentioned last week, we’re in the throes of bulldozing the current site with a fresh “look and feel” on the way.

Considering the dowdy design, I’m especially appreciative of the growing number of folks who make the time to read the blog.

To borrow from the Beatles, it’s been a “long and winding road” to establish a readership with critical mass. Part of the blog’s growth has come from stockpiling posts over the years. Looking at traffic over a 12-month period that covered August 2013 thru July 2014, you can see nine of the top 10 posts for this period were published prior to August 2013 with the vast majority of this recent traffic coming from organic search or what we like to term “earned search:”

BlogTrafficChart SEO organic search

I’ve highlighted this point because some folks have questioned the value of corporate blogging. We believe that a company blog makes for one of the most effective thought leadership platforms on the planet.

But it does require work and time.

For those in communications or marketing who prefer a magic wand, you’re right to take a pass on corporate blogging. Pixie dust alone will not bring readers to a blog.

As our client campaigns continue to encompass owned media and even paid media, my blog often acts as a laboratory for experimentation, ideally in a way that benefits the entire industry.

For example, because communicators typically come from an English, mass comms or journalism background dominated by words, the transition to visual storytelling can be a challenge. By striving to create original artwork for over 50 percent of the posts, we’ve come a long way on the visual storytelling front (aided by hiring a powerhouse creative director, Chauncey Hill). This has involved pushing beyond conventional photography into areas such as illustration as reflected in visuals such as the Pope taking a selfie and the misguided wisdom of a startup CEO copying Steve Jobs:


Pope and SteveJobs - visual storytelling


We’ve come to believe that illustration — where literally anything is possible — is the most underutilized form of visual storytelling in communications.

And we continue to explore the concept of Word Visuals like the one that recently played off the Gigaom mast head:


So I appreciate the pat on the back as acknowledgement that the blog serves an industry resource and an advocate for the communications profession.

Given the upheaval in our industry, there’s never been a better time to be in communications.

Or write about it.



PR as the Conscience of a Company

Conscience - PR

Public relations at its best acts as the conscience of a company.

Here’s what I mean. Companies often go through the painstaking exercise of crafting a mission or values statement. For example Starbucks adheres to the following values:

Creating a culture of warmth and belonging, where everyone is welcome.

Acting with courage, challenging the status quo and finding new ways to grow our company and each other.

Being present, connecting with transparency, dignity and respect.

Delivering our very best in all we do, holding ourselves accountable for results.

We are performance driven, through the lens of humanity.

Companies also spend an inordinate amount of time and money figuring what their brands should represent. This work can go on for weeks — or even months — backed by an unlimited supply of Skittles, Red Bull and focus groups.

Whether it’s values or a mission statement or brand attributes, it’s all theoretical as in this is how we want potential customers to perceive us. If they perceive us this way, there’s a high probability that they’ll buy our products or services.

In my PR Utopia, PR has a seat at the table — yes that table, the one made of thick mahogany where each chair has the trade-in value of a used Volvo — and a voice with the other executives who lead the company. This allows PR to ensure that decisions align with the company’s aspired values/mission/brand. If they don’t, PR has a platform on which to voice concerns and participate in a dialogue that adjusts or reconciles the issues.

This is the opposite of spin, making sure the actions — and the communication of those actions — reflect the inner makings of the company.

Remember, I said “PR Utopia.”

A guy can dream.

I’ve been thinking about this issue since listening to the presentation from Corey duBrowa, who heads global communications for Starbucks, at the Innovation Summit last month. His talk highlighted how social media exposed Starbucks for opening a new store that fell woefully short of Starbucks’ standards.

Starbucks Negative Tweets - Pr consciousness

This goes deeper than PR having a seat at the table. Corey’s coffee mug sits on the same table as Howard Schultz’s. But does Starbucks have the type of culture that allows the PR folks on the front line to speak up? In other words, Corey, Howard and the rest of the Starbucks executive management team aren’t diving into the minutia of every new store. Yet, somewhere along the line someone from the communications team must have noticed the store set the ugly finder howling. Did this person speak up and challenge the status quo (in the company’s value statement)? Is the culture such that PR can challenge the company on an issue — the quality of a new store’s physical structure — that sits outside the conventional realm of PR?

Obviously, I don’t know the answer.

What I can share is that roughly seven months later, Starbucks took the action of renovating the Highlands store.

Starbucks Yelp Review - PR conscious

I suspect Starbucks PR machinery is gearing up to promote the Highlands Opening 2.0.

Sidenote: If you’re interested in how the debacle was covered last July, check out BusinessInsider’s “This Prison-Like Starbucks Is Being Mocked As The Most Depressing In America.”



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Man Bites Dog; Makes Plea for Your Input on the Name “Ishmael’s Corner”

man bites dog- renaming ishmael's corner blog

Would you have reached this point if the headline simply read, “A Plea for Your Input on the Name ‘Ishmaels’ Corner’?”

It doesn’t matter.

You’re here; clickbait be damned.

Here’ the situation.

The “look and feel” of my blog harkens back to a time when AOL dominated and MySpace was hot. I believe my first notion to redesign the blog occurred four years ago. Obviously, acknowledging a problem and doing something about it are not one and the same.

But the moment has arrived.

The redesign of the blog is officially underway.

This is where I need your helping hand. If you could take roughly 30 seconds out of your crazed schedule to share your opinion on this blog’s name “Ishmael’s Corner,”  I would greatly appreciate the input.

In short, should I keep the current name? Yes or no.

Of course, if your perspective goes deeper than this question, by all means continue on. I value any and all comments.

Every time I consider the pros and cons, I end up in a psychological maze with no way out.

A little bit of historical context —

Since storytelling underpins the blog, I wanted a name with such a connotation. This led to the novel “Moby Dick” and the quasi double entendre:  Not only does Ishmael narrate the story, but he also starts the saga with one of the most famous lines in American literature, “Call me Ishmael.”

That’s how I ended up with the name “Ishmael’s Corner” when I launched the blog in 2008.

It wasn’t until years later that I figured out that no one under 40 knows this Ishmael character with the exception of bible scholars who think of Ishmael as the first son of Abraham. Not exactly my target audience.

My good friend and colleague Steve Farnsworth (a.k.a. @Steveology) has chided me on numerous occasions over Hobee’s coffee cake to change the name.

I’ve resisted because I felt that even if people missed the literary connection, there’s a certain amount of equity in the name after 600 plus posts. And there’s no getting around the fact that one gets comfortable with a name after reading it again and again and again.

But with the decision to bulldoze the site a done deal, now would be the logical time to change the name if, in fact, I do so.

Hence, the question, should I keep the name?

You can send your answer via Twitter (@LouHoffman), a posted comment or email


Before signing off, three names that I find clever:

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  • Dave’s Killer Bread: While “killer” has been overused, sandwiched between the founder and bread creates a name that sticks in your brain.
  • Spin Sucks: The word “spin” symbolizes bad communications. It took guts to play off this heartburn in naming a blog that serves communication professionals.
  • The Rude Baguette: This is an English language blog that covers the startup scene in France. I’m not sure an adjective has ever been put to better use.


And no, I’m not going to change the name of my blog to “Lou’s Rude and Killer Spin.”



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